Hi! My name is Zoe, and I’m an eighth grade student in Mr. Mayo’s third year film class: Lights, Camera, MEDIA, Literacy! Part of this year’s curriculum was to write and illustrate a children’s book with our production group. The stories had to incorporate all the elements of the plot diagram and the theme of transitions.
We began the writing process by completing a homework assignment in which we wrote about past transitional experiences, or periods in our lives where we faced tough obstacles or challenges. When we shared our stories in class we began to notice that many of our experiences were similar, so we created groups based on our shared experiences. Groups consisted of common experiences such as dealing with your parents getting a divorce, starting psychiatric therapy, coping with the death of a loved one, making new friends, gaining the courage to follow your dreams, and immigrating to the U.S. as a young child.
Once we were in our groups, we decided on a common story to express our shared experience. Most groups had two main writers, or sometimes everyone contributed to the story. I was the main writer in our group. The beginning of the whole process was choppy as you would expect. As the writers worked on the rough drafts of their stories, the other group members began doodling character and setting ideas.
We built our stories piece by piece following the basic plot structure. This consists of exposition, where the story introduces the characters, setting, and circumstances. This is followed by the rising action, when the inciting incident causes the main character to begin a journey on which they encounter many obstacles. This leads to the climax, the most exciting part of the story, usually consisting of some sort of conflict. This is followed by the falling action and/or realizations following the climax. And finally, the resolution, when the problem is resolved and the story comes to an end. The main character goes through a character arc, an internal journey, which gives them a new state of mind or a new perspective as a result of their journey.
Once our stories were about two drafts in, we began the illustrating process. We created master storyboards using large pieces of bulletin board paper in order to lay our stories out. The writers broke the story down into pages and the artists started sketching out possible ideas for their illustrations. The most important thing was to be free and loose with the drawings in the beginning. The illustration process is similar to the writing process in this way. You have to first create a series of rough sketches to help figure out what you want the illustrations to look like. This is similar to when I wrote the rough draft of my story, “Wake Up”, for the first time. You can’t overthink what you are doing. You just have to let it come out freely.
Here’s a short video of all the groups working on their master storyboards:
The illustrators then worked with a local artist, Arturo Ho, who showed them different techniques in creating their characters and settings on paper. As the artists sketched the master storyboards, the illustrations slowly started to evolve and come together. Once the master storyboards were complete, the artists began carefully creating their final illustrations. With the help of Arturo Ho, the artists experimented with watercolor and shading techniques. The end products are beautiful.
Life isn’t always what you want it to be. Sometimes, your parents get divorced. Sometimes, you have to start over in a new city, state, or even country. Sometimes, you have to seek professional help for emotional issues. But if you’re able to appreciate the difficult parts of life, you will grow to be a better person. We wrote these books for children. We want them to not only enjoy them, but to learn from them. We want them to understand the bad parts of life when they are young, so they can cope with it better when they are older. If these lessons are taught at a young age, they will be better adults. But how do you teach these lessons? You have to speak their language. That’s what we have done here.
Zoe is an 8th grade student in Mr. Mayo’s media literacy class. She wrote “Wake Up”, one of the children’s stories in the recently published book, Transitions. Zoe also wrote the prologue to the book You can buy Transitions on Amazon or download the Free PDF Version of Transitions.








This is simply wonderful. That’s all.
Thanks for the comment. Are you a teacher? We’d love other teachers to share this idea with their students. It’s a great opportunity and an amazing process. Let us know if you have any questions.
Hello,
I’m Gaurav, wrote one of the stories as well. It was a long process and as Zoe said “the end products were beautiful.” We went through many steps like brainstorming the story and drawing the illustrations. The steps were hard but they were fun and I really liked the books after they were published. I wrote one of the stories in the book. The story was called Sakano the Bekko. This is a story about a Koi fish who immigrates from Japan and has a hard time fitting in and making new friends. This story is based on our experience. All of us in our group immigrated from another country and we wrote the story based on our personal experiences.
Thanks, for letting us share our books in your website.
If you have any question please let us know.
Hi, I’m Shifali, another student who had the priviedge of doing this excellent project. This book took a lot of hard work and effort, but the result was outstanding. I participated in both the writing and the art and it’s a great feeling to see what you can create based on a challenge you’ve been through. I hope you buy this book and see how anyone can accomplish anything no matter how young they are.
Hi Zoe. I am a literacy coach at my school and loved your post. You are so thorough with your explanation of the process. I certainly will share with all the teachers I work with. I especially liked your step by step approach and am excited about the fact you got to work with a working artist for tips in the art too. It seems that you all were so motivated because you were giving support to others for real life problems. I will buy this book & share with the teachers of younger students especially. I enjoyed the stories & know that they come from the heart. I like the way you explained about characters in these sentences: “The main character goes through a character arc, an internal journey, which gives them a new state of mind or a new perspective as a result of their journey.” I’ve taught fiction writing quite a lot & never saw it explained quite this way. I hope you don’t mind if I keep your words for the future. Congratulations on the publishing-quite a feat!
Ms. Baie,
Thank you so much! That was very kind of you. I’m extremely glad that you have decided to buy a copy of the book. Feel free to share it with whomever you choose, as we would love for this to get around. We are all so excited about having our stories published and read by others, and each person gives us one more glimmer of pride. This process was an amazinf oppurtunity, and thank you for your support and awknowlegdement. It means a lot.
–Zoe
Wow! What a great story! My hat is off to anyone who creates illustrated children’s stories. It is difficult work and its no joke. About 2 years ago my two sons (now 12 and 8 yrs old) asked me to work with them to turn one of their favorite made-up bedtime stories into a book or movie. Little did I know how much work it would take. The images on this site reminded me of all of the late nights I spent learning to work with 3d software to create characters and full scenes. After two years, we finished our labor of love, Puddle Boy – its a childrens book in YouTube video format.
Anyway, it was a great experience. Now my sons have even bigger and more compex video creation aspirations. It’s great to foster creativity. I hope you go on to become the next Spielberg.